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In our  Tautoro School  we have so many new students who have enrolled  in our school. Because of the new enrollments every time we have a  powhiri or assembly we always get squashed, and we feel really uncomfortable. So the facility that is needed in Tautoro School  is a new hall. Why do we need a hall? First a  hall is needed by Tautoro School because when we have new students enrolling in our school, every new child needs  a powhiri. There are more students enrolling into our school every week and we are feeling really squashed in our small library.  If we had a hall our manuhiri would feel more comfortable and they would be able to shake everybody's hands without pushing past students and then they would feel very welcomed, comfortable and feel more relaxed.  Secondly: if we had a community hall we would also be able to play sports inside.   If it was raining or if it became too hot. Then we wouldn't be missing out on our fitness and fitness  makes you feel good and it exercises your brain. And this would help students to concentrate more in class. Another reason why we need a hall is so that we could get a kitchen built in the hall then we would be able to have technology at our school instead of travelling to town to use another school's kitchen.  We would be able to learn how to cook and bake and then we would be able to help our whanau cook and bake at home. Last of all we need  a hall because our community would be able to use the hall in the weekend which will bring  all our local communities together for meetings or gala days. In conclusion, I strongly believe we need a community hall at our school because our  Tautoro school community is growing every week with new students enrolling into our school. It is important  that we have a new hall so that we won't be squashed and then we would feel comfortable and then we would listen better because we would all feel relaxed. If we don't have a hall we will always feel squashed and we will not have enough room in our teeny library for new students.

                                 Score     Reasons why you have given this mark

Ideas	R5	I’m using a 5 because there is a lot of ideas
Structure Language	R4	It has all the structures and well developed
Organisation	R5	I’m giving this a 5 because the writing is in paragraphs
Vocabulary	R3	There is a lot of simple words and some extra detail
Sentence Structure	R5	I’m giving it a 5 because the sentence are in older
Punctuation	R5	Because the punctuation is in the right spot
Spelling	R5	Because the spelling has difficult words
Total	32	4b

Spelling week 7

Write your spelling words out five times every night

Shallow                       anger pale                           wade

Stream                        hunger shake                        trade

Moss                           hungry snake                        sash

Carpet                         drank danger                      splash

Word   Hunt Complete these sentences with words from your spelling list

The word which is made up of two three letter words is ___________ trade___________________

If you have not eaten all day, you will be _______ hungry___________________________________

If you wade into a __stream_________ _______and slip, you may make a_____splash

‘ ___________________

Opposites  Find words in the list which mean the opposite

Safety ______danger______________

Deep __Shallow__________________

Dark _____pale_______________

Write five sentences using your spelling words.

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