brooklyns Word Works T3.4

 

Persuasive Writing

WALT: write a persuasive text.

Success Criteria: I will have

• Introduction explains my opinion about the topic.
• Strong reasons for my opinion.
• Linking words - firstly, secondly, lastly
• A conclusion that reminds my readers of my opinions.

Everyone should/should not be allowed to stay home from work or school on their birthdays.

Everyone should be allowed to take the day off from school or work when it's their birthday. I wouldn´t want to sit in class for 6 hours when I could use that six hours to play on my PS4 with my friend who lives in Australia.

Firstly, everyone should be allowed to stay home on their birthday because everyone stays home on the Queen's birthday. Why is it that she gets a holiday and we don’t, I think we’re special too. We are all special so a day off on our birthday would be perfect.

Secondly, yes we should be allowed to stay home on our birthday so we can relax and have a day off. I think we should stay home to do what we want to do because it is our birthday, instead of having to do work or go to school and do school work for 6 hours. A day away from school would mean I could stay home and chat with friends,  I will probably play games with my friends on NBA 2k 21 .

Lastly, if staying home meant a day off work or school then we could use that day to do things for ourselves like going out, getting dinner, lunch and going shopping. It wouldn’t hurt for us to stay home .

So in conclusion these are the many reasons why I think we should be allowed to stay home on our birthdays.

Brooklyn Te Awa

Soft materials

 

Homework

 

My Art Pieces

 We are learning to use art to tell a story.

To be succesfull we had to reflect on our art work and share our thinking about the colours we chose and the designs we created and how they represent our whanau and whakapapa

Te reo task W9

 

Spelling W9T2